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Azog and his pack of wargs and orcs finally arrived at the edge of a rock outcrop and down below them were their prey: the dwarfish women. He’d been waiting for this moment for a long time. The moment he’d finally crush those dwarves.

The light from the sun faded as it set and darkness began overtaking the landscape.

A group of wargs then approached Azog, growling and snarling and saliva dripping from their mouths.

“Run them down!” he ordered “Tear them to pieces!”

The wargs howled and charged down the hill, roaring as they went.


The girls were frightened out of their minds. They could hear the wargs closing in on them.

“Oh great.” Traude said “Out of the frying pan…”

“And into the fire!” Gillian said “Run, quickly!”

“B-But Frieda’s injury!” Kamilla said.

“Bridget, carry her, quick!” Ophelia ordered.

The girls didn’t need to be told a second time because they grabbed all their weapons and made a run for it with Bridget once again having to carry Frieda. They ran as fast as they possibly could given the terrain and looked for another route to escape but the farther they went down the path the more narrow it seemed to get. And the wargs were getting ever closer.

Brianna was doing her best to keep pace (she was behind Bridget and Kamilla) when suddenly she tripped over a log and toppled over just as warg leapt over her and landed right in front of her.

“Brianna!” Kamilla called out from several feet away behind the warg.

The warg stared at Brianna with hate-filled eyes and snarled at her. Brianna’s mind flashed back to Bertha telling her of Beate’s encounter with wargs. Everything matched up: the large size, the shark-like fangs and that horrendous growl.

The thing suddenly lunged at her and Brianna shut her eyes and drew her sword and held it out in front of her when suddenly she felt the sword go through something as she heard a roar and the sword fell out of her hands and she felt something furred touch her feet.

She opened her eyes to see the warg lying dead at her feet and her sword embedded into the things skull. She then looked at her dress. Part of it was stained red with blood. She then heard kafuffle behind her and saw as Traude and Daniela killed another warg before it got to the others.

Suddenly, she heard some yelling and she turned to her left to see a warg chasing Ottilie. But with lightning reflexes she twirled around and clobbered the warg right in the skull and it flopped to the ground with a loud crack when Ottilie hit it with the axe.

And then Brianna, realizing the danger she might be in if they stayed here, grabbed her sword and began to tug on the handle. But it wouldn’t budge. She looked behind her and saw the wargs coming closer in the distance.

“BRIANNA RUN!!!” Bertha screamed from up ahead.

Brianna then grabbed the sword with all her might and placed her left foot on the dead wargs head and tugged tightly. The sword finally slid out of the wargs skull and was freed followed by a small spurt of blood as Brianna stumbled back but managed to balance herself. As soon as the sword was free she made a run for it so she could just the others.

But now the girls had a bigger problem. They suddenly found the pathway they were on led to a ledge that dropped all the way down to the foot of the mountain. The girls stooped so suddenly that Barbara almost ran right of the cliff but Daniela and Bertha restrained her just in time and pulled her back.

Gillian searched for options. The wargs were coming ever closer from behind and now they were on the edge of a cliff. They couldn’t go forward or back. They couldn’t go sideways.

They were boxed in. Not a good situation to be in. There had to be a way out. There had to…wait. The trees. Of course!

“Up into the trees, girls!” she ordered “It’s our only chance!”

“What?!” Traude asked.

“DO AS I SAY!!!” Gillian roared.

The girls quickly started climbing the trees as best they could. Gillian drew her sword and guarded the girls as they climbed up. Brianna finally caught up with the group and ran up to a tree where Barbara, Bertha, Nadja, Daniela and Bridget were attempting to climb and Beate was standing guard under right next to Gillian. Gillian was very relieved to see Brianna to say the least.

“Up into the trees!” she told her “Come on, Brianna! Climb!”

Brianna attempted to scramble up the tree and would have fallen off except Bridget grabbed her just in time and helped her up and Beate climbed up right behind Brianna leaving Gillian the sole person on the ground.

The wargs were now seconds away from the trees. Gillian decided it was as good a time as any and ran up to the tree where Traude was and she climbed onto the first two branches and Ottilie and Dorothea helped her up just as the wargs arrived and one of the wargs jaws barely missed Gillian’s backside. She clambered as high as she could partly thanks to the girls help.

And this was the arrangement the girls were in: on one tree were Barbara, Bertha, Daniela, Nadja, Bridget, Beate and Brianna and on the other was Dorothea, Ottilie, Traude, Gerlinde, Kamilla, Frieda and Ophelia. And at the bottom of the trees were the wargs.

The wargs attempted to climb the trees, their jaws snapping together almost rhythmically and their claws scratching the oak and ripping the bark off along with some tree sap. But no matter how hard they tried they couldn’t climb the trees. The trees shook violently and some loose branches fell off but they just couldn’t climb the trees.

Up in the second tree, Gillian looked at Dorothea who looked rather dizzy to say the least.

“I-I’m too old for this.” she panted.

“Yeah I know.” Dorothea said.

Suddenly a loud, booming voice echoed and the wargs retreated back a few feet. The girls peeked up through the branches to see Azog atop his warg. Kamilla then tapped Traude on the shoulder.

“A-Auntie…” Kamilla stammered as she pointed “Look.”

Traude looked where Kamilla was pointing and her heart suddenly sank. She pushed the branch down to get a better look and she still couldn’t believe it. Her enemy was not only alive but had been in fact chasing them the whole time. To make matters worse, he was looking right at her and it he had a wicked smile on his face

“Do you smell it?” he said loudly “The smell of fear? You’re father reeked of it, Traude, daughter of Thrain. And now, so do you.”

“No.” Traude said in disbelief “It cannot be.”

Brianna, Gillian and the rest of the group were equally shocked. Azog then pointed his club, which he held in his right hand, at Traude.

“That one is mine.” he ordered before waving his club above his head “KILL THE OTHERS!!!”

The wargs then roared and lunged at the trees and resumed scratching and slamming into the trees only this time they attempted to jump. Their jaws snapped at the poor girls who did their best to climb higher and the wargs snapping jaws barely missed them.

“DRINK THEIR BLOOD!!!” Azog roared.

The wargs then did something unexpected. They went straight for the tree Barbara, Bertha, Daniela, Nadja, Bridget, Beate and Brianna were in much to their horror. Some began pushing against one of the trees while the others dug into the ground furiously, ripping roots from the ground and kicking dust and rocks everywhere.

The tree they were on suddenly creaked and began to lean. It was falling over. The girls quickly began to panic as the tree leaned ever farther and soon it began colliding with the tree next to it, causing that to start falling over. They all quickly jumped onto that tree as the previous tree fell down but the wargs quickly moved to that tree as well and soon began ripping into the roots of the tree.

“WHAT’LL WE DO?!!” Brianna exclaimed.

“Get into our tree!” Gillian called out “Hurry!”

No sooner had Gillian said that the tree Brianna and her group were on began to fall and they wasted no time in jumping onto the tree that Gillian’s group was on. Bertha almost slipped when the branch she landed on broke but Beate managed to catch her with Bridget’s help just as the wargs surrounded the tree.

Now all the girls were in the same tree and watched as the tree Brianna’s group were on slipped off the cliff and fell straight down dragging a piece of the cliff with it. Above the scene the moon shone brightly and the wind blew through the leaves and through the girls hair.

Gillian then noticed two things in rapid succession. The first was an orange moth with black spots on it’s wings on a nearby branch. She carefully moved her staff for the moth to walk on. The moth moved onto the tip of the staff and Gillian moved the staff towards her until the moth was just inches away from touching her nose.

She then quietly whispered something to the moth and off it flew and as soon as it took off she turned her head and noticed the second thing. All over the tree were pinecones and there was a good number of them clambered together nearby her within arms-reach.

Suddenly an idea popped up in her head. It was insane. So insane that it just might work.

Without hesitation, she grabbed a pinecone and rubbed it against her staff and twirled in her hands at the same time and began blowing on it. Some of the girls took notice.

“Gillian, what are you doing?!” Frieda asked.

Within seconds, the pinecone caught fire and Gillian threw it directly at the ground near the wargs. And the moment the pinecone hit the ground, the twigs and grass around it ignited and were set aflame.

Azog, his orcs and the wargs were shocked to say the least.

The girls quickly caught on to what Gillian did, especially Traude.

“Everybody, grab some pinecones and give them to Gillian!” she ordered.

Everyone did as instructed and Gillian helped ignite a few pinecones and gave them to the girls who passed them around for others to ignite. They did so rather quickly and as soon as the pinecones started burning the girls threw them down at the wargs.

The girls didn’t stop until they’d literally thrown every pinecone in that tree at the wargs, all of which were on fire. Pretty soon a virtual wall of fire surrounded the tree and it only grew as broken down barks and logs ignited.

The wargs retreated and howled in fear and one was even on fire. Azog, upon witnessing this, angrily roared in defiance.

The girls on the other hand cheered very loudly. They finally seemed safe from their enemy and they’d get out of this alive.

And then the tree began  to crack and lean.

The Adventures of Brianna Baggins Chapter 23
Now things are gonna get moving! 
The goblin king growled at the girls as Gillian stepped in front of the girls with her sword drawn and staff in her other hand. Behind the girls were more goblins who had finally caught up with them and had them at blade point.

“Did you honestly think you could escape me!” the goblin king said “What are you going to do now, eh?!”

He then smacked his staff on the bridge which caused it to creak and shake. Gillian stepped back a few feet and almost her balance but the girls picked her up and helped her back up.

“I said, what are you going to do now wizard?!” the goblin king demanded.

Gillian rolled her eyes. He DID ask what she was going to do so he did have what followed coming. Gillian promptly poked the goblin king right in his left eye. He exclaimed in pain and annoyance and then Gillian then slashed his stomach with her sword. The goblin king screamed in pain and fell to the ground. He then looked at Gillian in bafflement.

“That’ll do it.” the goblin king said “You clever motherfu-”

Gillian then slashed the goblin king’s throat open before he could finish that profanity. Her and the girls had enough of goblins for one day. But when the dead body of the goblin king hit the bridge it creaked and swayed more then ever. The girls quickly huddled together and prepared for the worst.

Suddenly, without warning, the bridge they were on collapsed and the section they were all on fell straight down. Down, down, down it went, slamming into other bridges and pathways with debris flying everywhere. Amazingly, the girls were able to hang on with all their might until they finally hit the bottom with a tremendous crash and a cloud of dust.

As the girls moaned, Gillian got back up on her feet. She tapped her staff on the ground and the top of her staff lit up, illuminating the area her and the girls were in. She could now clearly see that the girls were getting up out of the rubble and made sure they were all present and accounted for. She then looked up and then got a shocked expression on her face.

“Girls, would you mind coming towards me please?” she ordered “Right now.”

The girls were too exhausted to argue so they just ran over to Gillian until they were right behind her.

“Okay were here.” Traude said “Now…why did you ask us to-”

Suddenly the goblin king’s dead body crashed into what was left of the bridge and a cloud of dust blew over the girls. They coughed and did their best to wipe away the dust from their faces, eyes and dresses.

“Well that could have been worse.” Bertha coughed.

“For once I believe you.” Bridget said.

All the girls suddenly heard loud screeching and they looked up and gasped in horror. Wave upon wave of goblins were closing in on them and running down the cave walls. They were far away but they were closing in.

“There’s too many of them!” Daniela said “We can’t fight them!”

“And Frieda’s hurt!” Kamilla barked.

“Only one thing will save us: daylight!” Gillian exclaimed “Let’s move! If we’re lucky this will be the way out!”

And the girls quickly picked up their things and ran after Gillian as fast as their feet could carry them.


An exhausted Gollum finally climbed over a set of rocks and stumbled onto a pathway leading out of the mountain to a nearby cave entrance. It was over ten feet tall and fifteen feet wide and Gollum was temporally blinded by the shaft of light going through the opening as he continued searching for his ring.

“Wait!” he screamed “My precious! WAIT!!! Gollum! Gollum!”

Brianna, in the meantime, had finally caught up to Gollum but stayed hidden and tried to be as quiet as possible. As she tried to move in closer she suddenly heard faint shouting and footsteps slowly getting louder and she backed away.

Gollum heard it too and in no time at all ducked behind the rocks to avoid being seen. And suddenly Gillian and the girls stumbled onto the scene.

“Come on!” Gillian ordered.

Brianna was so happy to see the girls she almost audibly shouted but she wisely kept her mouth shut and watched as the girls ran past her and Gollum without noticing either of them. She quietly drew her sword and crept up towards Gollum who at the moment his back turned towards her, looking out at the pathway. He suddenly began to turn and Brianna stepped back a bit and prepared for whatever came next.

Instead she was baffled to see Gollum’s entire face and mood had completely changed. Just a few moments ago he’d wanted to do who knows what to her. Now, he looked as if his entire world came crashing down. His ears dropped ever so slightly and his eyes began welling up with tears.

“I-It’s gone.” he muttered to himself as his voice broke and then a single tear slid down his cheek from his left eye.

Brianna suddenly didn’t feel so well herself. She suddenly began to feel very sorry for this Gollum. It seemed this ring she was wearing really was apparently all he had. She then looked at her sword and then back at Gollum.

You poor, poor thing. she thought to herself But I have to get out. I can’t stay here.

Suddenly Gollum smelled the air and he suddenly began growling as his face changed back to anger. Brianna decided it was now or never. She backed away a bit and then clambered onto a rock and leapt just above Gollum but her foot smacked him right in the face. Gollum toppled over just as Brianna cleared the rocks and as soon as she hit the ground she made a bee-line as best she could towards the cave exit. As she ran she heard Gollum scream loudly as he got up and smashed his fists on the ground.


Brianna was then temporarily blinded by the sudden burst of light from the sun and as she ran down the mountain she breathed in the fresh air. She was finally out of that place and she continued to run as fast as her feet could carry her.


Gillian and the girls found themselves a clearing in the forested mountain side and all finally stopped and tried to catch their breath. Bridget, who had been carrying Frieda, put her down gently on a rock and Kamilla and Ophelia rushed to her side.

“Okay, we need to bandage her wound, quick!” Ophelia said as she began tending to Frieda’s rather large cut which was still bleeding and had now stained her beautiful dress.

“Alright, are we all here?” Gillian said as she began counting the dwarves “Let’s see…Traude, Barbara, Daniela, Bertha, Beate, Dorothea, Ottilie, Nadja, Gerlinde, Ophelia, Frieda, Kamilla and Bridget.” she laughed “That makes thirteen and….wait…”

She suddenly looked around. Brianna was nowhere in sight. In fact she hadn’t seen Brianna at all in the mountain on their way out.

“Where is Brianna?!” she demanded.

The girls suddenly noticed and looked around for her but she was nowhere to be found or seen.

“Curse the half-ling!” Daniela moaned “Now she’s lost?!”

“I thought she was-OW!” Frieda exclaimed as she glared at Ophelia “That stings!”

“That means it’s working.” Ophelia said.

“B-But I thought Brianna was with Dorothea!” Frieda said as she looked towards Dorothea.

“Whoa, hey, don’t blame me!” Dorothea barked.

“Where did you last see her?” Gillian asked.

“I think I last saw her when the goblins captured us though I can’t be sure.” Nadja piped up.

“Well what happened exactly?” Gillian inquired “Tell me!”

“I’ll tell you what happened.” Traude said as she walked up to the group center “She saw her chance and she took it.”

“I-I don’t understand, Traude.” Beate said.

“Don’t you get it, Beate?” Traude replied “She’s abandoned us. She’s thought of nothing but her bed, couch and garden since she’s left home. We will not be seeing our burglar again. She is long gone.”

The girls looked very saddened by this but Beate in particular looked as if she’d burst out crying. The first friend outside of her family Beate had now seemed to abandon them and she would never come back. Bertha decided to do the right thing and wrap her right arm around her cousin.

“Long gone you say?” said a familiar voice.

The girls suddenly gasped and turned around to see Brianna emerge from behind a nearby tree. They all sighed immense sighs of relief and Gillian chuckled in amazement.

“Brianna Baggins!” she said “I’ve never been more happy to see anyone in my life!”

“I-I’m sorry I gave you all a terrible fright!” Brianna said.

“At least you’re alright.” Beate piped up.

“But…we’d given you up!” Kamilla said.

“How did you get past the-OW!” Frieda exclaimed as Ophelia applied the medicine “How did you get past the goblins?”

“Yeah, how’d you do that?” Daniela inquired.

Brianna looked around and chuckled nervously and she stuffed her hands in her pocket. She couldn’t let them know her little secret.

“Oh you know…” she said as she twirled the ring between her fingers in her pocket “We hobbits have our tricks you know?”

Gillian looked at her with concern. She was acting awfully suspicious even for her. But she dismissed it as probably shock from getting out of that horrid place.

“What does it matter?” Gillian finally said “She’s back.”

“Wait a minute! It does matter.” Traude said before turning to Brianna “I want to know. Why did she come back?”

Brianna darted her eyes everywhere. All eyes were on her. Especially Traude who gave her that stare she almost always gave when she demanded to know the truth. Brianna’s eyes then darted back to Gillian who gave her a look that said ‘Well, young lady, why did you?” She sighed and finally took her hands out of her pocket.

“Look I know all of you doubt me. And I know you always have.” Brianna replied “And you’re right I often think of Bag-End. And my miss my books. And my arm-chair, my garden. My neighbors. See that’s where I belong. That’s home.” she then looked directly at all the girls “But you don’t have a home. It was stolen from you. But I will help you take it back if I’m able. That’s why I came back.”

The girls stayed in silence for a few moments as they thought over what Brianna had said. And then Traude did something unexpected. She looked at Brianna and smiled a soft, kind smile. Brianna felt rather brave. She was giving up a journey home, back to Bag-End, to help these dwarves. She had a feeling they’d need her. And, in a way, she needed them.

Gillian then chuckled softly. “Hobbits truly are amazing creatures, aren’t they?”

And then the girls heard something they didn’t expect. Something that sent shivers down their spines.

Wargs howling.
The Adventures of Brianna Baggins Chapter 22
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As a way to recover from the bore-fest of 47 Ronin, I decided to sit down with my brother and watch the Academy-Award nominated film The Descendants. And, well, here’s my review.

Here’s the plot in a nutshell:

A land baron tries to reconnect with his two daughters after his wife is seriously injured in a boating accident.

A genre I’m actually am quite fond of is familial dramas or comedies. I come from a big family and I’ve seen movies that have many familial elements in them (like Silver Linings Playbook, Big Fish and Despicable Me). So I relieved to find that this movie was enjoyable. Let’s begin the acting:

George Clooney is best known playing suave guys but here he plays Matt King as a struggling businessman and father. And he does a great job at it.

Shailene Woodley delivers a truly great performance as Matt’s teenage daughter Alexandra. At first glance she seems like she’ll be the stereotypical teenage brat but it’s quickly shown that she has depth to her and there’s a legitimate reason why she’s angry. Her Golden-globe nomination was deserved.

As for the rest of the cast they do good jobs including Beau Bridges and a small but great dramatic performance by Judy Greer.

Alexander Payne directs the film very well and his cinematographer Phedon Papamichael looks very nice and while not spectacular it still looks gorgeous with the film being set in Hawaii and all. It’s nice in the same way Andrew Lesnie’s cinematography for Rise of the Planet of the Apes is: it’s nice in it’s simplicity.

Alexander Payne also co-wrote the script with Nat Faxon and Jim Rash.  It’s a quiet yet strangely well written script with people who feel like real people. Kind of like Big Fish in a way.

However, the film is sadly not perfect. Alexandra’s boyfriend for example I found to be pretty obnoxious and I don’t know why he was in this movie for more than one scene. Though it was worth it to see him get punched.

Matt’s other daughter Scottie (played by Amara Miller) kind of disturbed me. I know children have their ways of coping with something as big as their mom dying but when a girl whom I assume is at least thirteen is talking about another girls…um…unmentionable hair and may or may not watch their friend’s dad’s porn movies and just overall acts too snarky for her own good something is seriously wrong.

A big thing that did detract was the soundtrack. It's not that I hate Hawaiian music but the happy-go lucky ukelele music and the bizarre vocals kinda suck the emotion out of the film and cause massive mood whiplash. I think a soft orchestral score like something by Thomas Newman would have worked better.

Another thing that keeps the movie from getting a perfect score is something my brother pointed out: the second sub-plot of Matt trying to debate whether or not to sell a large piece of land doesn’t really belong in the story. The main plot of the movie is about a man reconnecting with his daughters and dealing with his wife’s infidelity. Not much room there for a land-deal subplot.

That being said, I did like this movie and thought it’s nominations and it’s Best Adapted Screenplay win was deserved though it’s understandable why The Artist won because that movie is amazing. Had this movie axed the land-deal subplot and focused more on the father/daughter aspect or even more of Judy Greer’s character, the movie would have been perfect. But I suggest you watch it for yourself to draw your own conclusions.
The Descendants Review
I give the film an 8 out of 10.
Traude and her group, unfortunately, were still stuck with the goblins who were currently bringing in things which obviously were torture devices. Although to be fair, the girls thought it wouldn’t be as torturous as the goblin kings singing. And sadly, he was singing AGAIN. And he was getting some kind of sick pleasure out of singing the following song:

Bones will be shattered, necks will be wrung!
You'll be beaten and battered, from racks you'll be hung!
You will die down here and never be found!
Down in the deep of Goblin-Town!

As the gobbling king wrapped up his song the bat-eared goblin grabbed Orcrist and began to unsheathe it. The moment he saw that sword he shrieked and threw it to the ground. The goblin king saw it and backed away as if it was from an alien planet.

“I know that sword!” he exclaimed “It is the Goblin cleaver! The blade that sliced a thousand necks! KILL THEM!!!”

The goblins were quick to throw all the girls to the ground except for Traude who managed to throw some goblins back before goblins smacked her so hard she fell to the ground and one of the goblins grabbed her by her throat and pulled out a huge knife.

“CUT OFF HER HEAD!!!” the goblin king ordered.

As the goblin raised his knife the entire hall was engulfed in bright light. Everyone and everything was thrown back and it seemed as if all the sound was muted. The light then disappeared and light slowly returned to the hall. The girls then looked up slightly and saw a figure walking towards them from where the goblin kings throne stood a few moments ago. The figure then finally was revealed when light finally returned to the cave hall.

It was Gillian. With her staff in one hand and her sword in the other.

The girls looked up along with whatever goblins remained and stared in astonishment. Gillian then looked directly at the dwarves.

“Take up arms.” She said.

The girls then looked at their weapons and then at Gillian.

“Fight!” she ordered “FIGHT!!!”

That’s all the girls needed to hear. They wasted no time in smacking the goblins away and getting their weapons. Gillian rushed in to join the action and sliced through two goblins with Glamdring.

“She wields the Foe-Hammer!” the goblin king screamed “The Beater! Bright as daylight!”

The goblins could do little to stop the girls because although they didn’t look it, the dwarves were good fighters. Very good. Most of the goblins barely got within two feet before they were sliced up or cut down.

The bat-eared goblin decided to try his luck and lunged to attack Frieda but Kamilla noticed just in time and in seconds the goblins sword and her sword clashed and with three strikes Kamilla slashed the goblins throat open and kicked him aside.

The goblin king had quite enough of these dwarves. He picked up his giant skull staff and charged at Traude, though due to his massive size who could only amble towards her.

“Traude!” Nadja yelled “Catch!”

Traude caught Orcrist just in time and then just as the goblin king’s staff went down, Traude drew her sword and the two weapons collided. The impact was so powerful and the goblin king was so fat and huge, that when Traude blocked the staff, he stumbled backwards and crashed into his throne which in turn collapsed under him and that part of the floor caved in and the goblin king and several other goblins fell straight down, screeching as they went.

Gillian by this point had joined the fight. And she was just as skilled as the girls despite her age. After slicing a goblin down and cutting another one’s head off, she quickly grabbed her staff which she had dropped by accident. Fortunately by now, almost all the goblins on the platform had been dealt with but more goblins were angrily charging via the bridge.

“Girls, quickly!” Gillian ordered “Grab your bags and weapons and follow me! Hurry!”  

The girls grabbed their bags and weapons and wasted no time in following after Gillian with the enraged goblins not far behind.


Brianna was becoming very tired of running but every time she heard Gollum shriek behind her she kept running and running. Each time harder then the last.

But finally, she came upon a dead end. A set of rocks blocked her path and she desperately looked for a way out. Gollum’s screeches were starting to sound closer. She looked up at the rocks. Darn, she couldn’t climb over them.

“Give it back!” screamed Gollum from seemingly a few feet away “Give it to us!”

Brianna felt shivers down her spine and looked all over for an escape route. Finally she saw something. Just at the center of the rocks was a crack in the rock formation large enough for a small person. No, make that a hobbit. It was perfect. She wasted no time in clambering through the hole as best she could as Gollum got ever nearer.

But just when she thought she was free, she suddenly felt a jerk on her dress and she fell to the ground. She then whipped her head around to see what happened. To her shock, her dress had gotten caught on one of the more jagged rocks.

“Damn it!” she hissed at herself.

She then leaned forward, got on her knees and tried to tug the dress free when she heard an all too familiar screech. She turned her head up just to see Gollum, looking enraged just a few feet away, his eyes filled with hate.

“It’s ours.” he snarled “IT’S OURS!!!”

Brianna then tugged on her dress with all her might and part of the rock came loose and her dress tore slightly. The sudden freedom of her dress caused her to fall over flat on her back. And when she hit the ground Gollum’s ring flew right out of her pocket and up in the air.

Before she knew what she was doing, she put up her right hand and to her amazement, the ring gently landed on her ring-finger and then suddenly everything around her turned black and white and looked as if she was looking through hazy, smeared glass in fog.

Gollum suddenly found his way through the crack and Brianna rolled towards the cave wall to Gollum’s left. She made sure to be as quiet as possible so that Gollum hopefully wouldn’t see her.

But to her amazement, Gollum acted as if she wasn’t there at all. He looked all over the place and snarled.

“THIEF!” he screamed.

Brianna just couldn’t understand. How could Gollum not see her? She was right next to him and yet it was as if she didn’t exist at all or had simply vanished. But then it clicked in her head when she briefly looked at the ring.

She was invisible.

Gollum then interrupted her thoughts by screeching one more time and running straight forward.

“Baggins!” he screamed.

Brianna then looked around. She decided that Gollum would probably show her the way out if he thought he was chasing her. And due to her new-found invisibility, she hoped it wouldn’t be a problem as long as she stayed quiet.

It’s worth the risk. she thought I’ve got to get out. I just hope everyone else is doing better then me.


During all of this, the girls were running through the goblin city with Gillian in the lead and a horde of angry goblins behind. The girls were running as fast as they could. Whenever a goblin or two got in the way the girls smacked them away with their weapons.

“Quick! Split up!” Gillian ordered seeing the bridge separating into two just ahead.

And so, Gillian took Traude, Gerlinde, Ophelia, Kamilla, Frieda, Barbara and Daniela with her to the right, whilst Daniela took Dorothea, Nadja, Ottilie, Bridget, Bertha and Beate to the left. No sooner had the two groups separated then two goblins came rushing at Daniela’s group but Daniela hacked and smacked them away before they could reach any of the other girls. Everyone stopped however when they heard more goblins coming towards them from the front.

“What’ll we do?!” Beate asked.

Daniela looked around for something other then swords and axes to fight of the goblins. She then looked to her right and saw a very long piece of wood almost as long as two crocodiles lined tail to tail that was part of the wooden railway. She ten barked an order in dwarfish and the girls quickly cut the ropes loose and the piece of wood fell to the floor and the girls wasted no time in picking it up as the goblins came into view in front of them.

“CHARGE!!!” Daniela yelled.

And the girls ran forward and then swung the stick to the right and smacked the goblins away and off they fell off the bridge. The girls quickly turned to stick to the left and smacked away yet another group of goblins. And then they swung the stick to the right and smacked yet another group of goblins. The girls then quickly dropped the stick and drew their weapons.

“Here we go!” Daniela yelled.

And onward the girls charged into the goblin ranks, cutting, slicing, stabbing and axing goblins as they went. They looked up briefly and saw Gillian’s group just above them fighting their own group of goblins.

The two groups eventually met up via the top bridge moving towards and then engaged the goblins in a fierce battle. Swords clashed and sliced through opponents, black goblin blood spurted everywhere and the girls wielded their weapons with amazing skill. Even Beate, whom the goblins perceived as the weakest, put up an incredible fight, for although she didn’t have a sword or axe, no one could wield a spear like she.

Although Frieda was having a little bit of trouble. While she finished off a goblin in front of her, another goblin jumped from behind a rock with a large knife and slashed Frieda in the back. Frieda screamed in agonizing pain and she fell to the ground, but never once letting go of her sword.

Frieda then looked up just as the goblin raised his knife to stab her. She prepared for the worst when suddenly two arrows flew from out of nowhere and struck the goblin in the throat and between the eyes.  Frieda then looked behind her and saw her sister run to her side, pushing a goblin over the edge of the bridge before finally reaching her sister.

“Come on!” she exclaimed “Get up! Let’s go!”

“G-Go on without me.” Frieda groaned in pain “It’s too far.”

“IT’S NOT TOO DAMN FAR!” Kamilla barked before turning to look at Bridget and Dorothea who were coming to help “COME ON! HURRY!”

“Right, then.” Dorothea said as she and Bridget helped Frieda up “Come on, quick. Easy now.”

Frieda winced in pain as they lifted her up and Bridget carried her and Kamilla got a chance to see the blood on Frieda’s back, which made her feel nauseous. Suddenly three arrows whizzed just over Kamilla’s head and hit the nearby rocks.

She whizzed her head around to see some goblins charging at them with some bows and arrows. Kamilla wasted no time in drawing her sword and dodging and blocking any arrows that tried to hit her sister.

“Come on, this way!” Traude ordered from just ahead.

All of the girls then surrounded, Bridget, Frieda, Kamilla and Dorothea and they charged straight ahead towards Gillian, Traude, Barbara and Daniela who had managed to keep path clear. The girls finally reached them just as another mass horde of goblins came up behind them.

“Come on, quickly!” Gillian said “There may be a wall out!”

As soon as the girls crossed the bride, Daniela cut the ropes and knocked it over and the goblins tumbled away along with it. The girls noticed that just ahead was an unguarded bridge. Dorothea and Nadja quickly picked up the pace and ran so fast that they outran the group and were the first on the bridge.

“We’re almost there!” Dorothea exclaimed happily.

Suddenly out from under the floor-boards burst the goblin king and he clumsily climbed up with his grotesque staff in his right hand and cuts all over his body with blood flowing down from his left ear. Dorothea and Nadja backed away into the other girls how now had goblins behind them and the goblin king on the other side.

The Adventures of Brianna Baggins Chapter 21
Saying these chapters take a long time is an understatement. 
Yes today is my 18th birthday today and I'm excited as can be! And I would like to thank all my followers and friends on deviantart for being awesome and nice. I'm so sorry that I've barely been on the site but I have a Tumblr now so now I don't have as much time to be here but I hope to put more stuff here soon.

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